The changes I made between the first draft and the final draft were give more details and elaborate on the example of discourse of the young woman describing an individual to her parents differently and then describing the individual to her boyfriend. Also giving more explanation on what Discourse is and how it affects people and the environment they are in. As for deleting or taking out stuff I did not need, it was very easy because after rereading it I was able to caught my mistakes and deleting extra sentences that were repeating. What I see as the primary strength or success of this essay is that for every quote or example at the end of each I describe or try to connect it to relatable scenario as what I experience in the intro and over
