In The Essay, my writing I feel like is more me, and causal. In FYS on the other hand, it’s definitely more of an academic paper, which are hard for me to write. I like how in both papers though, I got to add personal stories, experiences, and thoughts about what I thought. What I think I did well in both, is the organization and the flow of the papers. Even though these two papers are from different classes, and our meant to be different writing styles I can tell that their has been an improvement. My FYS paper is from more of the middle of the semester whereas my essay paper is from closer to the end of the semester. I notice a difference in my confidence from the two different papers. I also notice that my FYS paper is more wordy than the essay paper. I also feel as if my essay paper is more detailed and in depth than my FYS. I think that’s because I didn’t realize how to bring the reader in until I got the hang of it later in the
In The Essay, my writing I feel like is more me, and causal. In FYS on the other hand, it’s definitely more of an academic paper, which are hard for me to write. I like how in both papers though, I got to add personal stories, experiences, and thoughts about what I thought. What I think I did well in both, is the organization and the flow of the papers. Even though these two papers are from different classes, and our meant to be different writing styles I can tell that their has been an improvement. My FYS paper is from more of the middle of the semester whereas my essay paper is from closer to the end of the semester. I notice a difference in my confidence from the two different papers. I also notice that my FYS paper is more wordy than the essay paper. I also feel as if my essay paper is more detailed and in depth than my FYS. I think that’s because I didn’t realize how to bring the reader in until I got the hang of it later in the