The grade I would have given this student for her presentation would be a 23/100. I think that she did not made any kind of effort on finding liable sources for her presentation. She had a bad introduction, and I really think that she could of don better on every aspect of her presentation.
Your attention device was inadequate/needs improvement in gaining our attention. (2)
Your credibility statement was inadequate/needs improvement. (1)
You attempt to establish relevance was inadequate/needs improvement. (1)
Your thesis statement was inadequate/needs improvement. (0)
Your forecast was inadequate/needs improvement. Be more specific. (1)
The speech BODY was devoid or had a limited use of connectors in the form of transition, signposting,
Your attention device was inadequate/needs improvement in gaining our attention. (2)
Your credibility statement was inadequate/needs improvement. (1)
You attempt to establish relevance was inadequate/needs improvement. (1)
Your thesis statement was inadequate/needs improvement. (0)
Your forecast was inadequate/needs improvement. Be more specific. (1)
The speech BODY was devoid or had a limited use of connectors in the form of transition, signposting,