This essay was a problem and solution essay where I choose a very controversial topic on illegal immigration and how to fix it. The changes I made to this essay were similar to the divorce essay I wrote which shows that I still need work in these areas. The problems that were occurring in this essay were once again fluency, grammar, wording, and back up my facts. To help polish this essay up I went back through and reread the essay a couple of times working on the parts that I knew needed some fine tuning done. Once I would read through it, and fix some errors I would then again read through it to see if I missed something. From this essay I learned that I need to make sure I was backing up my ideas with reliable sources. Also still need to make sure a reread my essays to catch simple mistakes before submitting
This essay was a problem and solution essay where I choose a very controversial topic on illegal immigration and how to fix it. The changes I made to this essay were similar to the divorce essay I wrote which shows that I still need work in these areas. The problems that were occurring in this essay were once again fluency, grammar, wording, and back up my facts. To help polish this essay up I went back through and reread the essay a couple of times working on the parts that I knew needed some fine tuning done. Once I would read through it, and fix some errors I would then again read through it to see if I missed something. From this essay I learned that I need to make sure I was backing up my ideas with reliable sources. Also still need to make sure a reread my essays to catch simple mistakes before submitting