Rylan Thon
Alliances
Imagine a school with no cliques. You can’t imagine that can you? In today’s society, people are naturally going to form groups. While the situation in the Lord Of The Flies and Lost are fictional, both stories broaden, deepen and sharpen the reader’s awareness of how leadership, loyalty and obedience determine the strength of an alliance.
Alliances in Lord Of The Flies could be questionable. “Ralph, Piggy, and Samneric are their own little group.” Leadership is also questionable in this type of position. Two leaders Ralph and Jack. Ideally Ralph is the better leader in the position because he knows how to control, guide, and form with the others. On the other hand, Jack is not a quality aspect because he desires power, …show more content…
Loyalty in Lord Of The Flies is very controversial. Based on when the boys become unloyal to Ralph and vacate him to be with Jack is an example. “Ralph, Piggy, and Samneric are their own little group.” Piggy and Samneric are showing their loyalty to Ralph by remaining by his side. Loyalty in Lost is very dissimilar in some of the ways from The Lord Of The Flies. John Locke the leader, is surrounded by many of his friends Jack, Sawyer, Kate, Desmond, etc. They all show their loyalty to John in many ways. But mostly by staying next to his side when Ben Linus came to demolish their …show more content…
You cannot imagine a school with no cliques because that is what our society is use to. Leadership, loyalty, and obedience strengthens our human alliance incredibly in so many different ways into today's world. Leadership determines who and what can guide and control based on a leader. Loyalty determines trustworthy, pure love, and integrity. Obedience determines trust, faithful, and strong. All of these strengths show the purpose of alliances.
Points
Formatting (6 pts. each)
6
Final Paper in correct format (typed, double-spaced, Times New Roman, 12 pt)
3
Few to no errors (GRUMPS) (4 = -1; 6 = -2; 8 = -3; etc)
Paragraph 1 (5 pts. each)
5
Thesis statement in first paragraph
5
Introduction using one of methods stated (anecdote, example, question, quotation, dialectic, image, statistic)
5
Argument presented in first paragraph
Body Paragraphs (3 pts. each)
1
Contains applicable topic sentences
0
Contains appropriate transitions
0
Contains logical, insightful supporting quotes or examples (total of 3 quotes required from LOTF) and 3 examples from movie/other book
0
Sets up and explains quotes and ties information back to the thesis
Conclusion (5 pts.)
5
Extends essay’s parameters or demonstrates significance of subject in larger
Alliances
Imagine a school with no cliques. You can’t imagine that can you? In today’s society, people are naturally going to form groups. While the situation in the Lord Of The Flies and Lost are fictional, both stories broaden, deepen and sharpen the reader’s awareness of how leadership, loyalty and obedience determine the strength of an alliance.
Alliances in Lord Of The Flies could be questionable. “Ralph, Piggy, and Samneric are their own little group.” Leadership is also questionable in this type of position. Two leaders Ralph and Jack. Ideally Ralph is the better leader in the position because he knows how to control, guide, and form with the others. On the other hand, Jack is not a quality aspect because he desires power, …show more content…
Loyalty in Lord Of The Flies is very controversial. Based on when the boys become unloyal to Ralph and vacate him to be with Jack is an example. “Ralph, Piggy, and Samneric are their own little group.” Piggy and Samneric are showing their loyalty to Ralph by remaining by his side. Loyalty in Lost is very dissimilar in some of the ways from The Lord Of The Flies. John Locke the leader, is surrounded by many of his friends Jack, Sawyer, Kate, Desmond, etc. They all show their loyalty to John in many ways. But mostly by staying next to his side when Ben Linus came to demolish their …show more content…
You cannot imagine a school with no cliques because that is what our society is use to. Leadership, loyalty, and obedience strengthens our human alliance incredibly in so many different ways into today's world. Leadership determines who and what can guide and control based on a leader. Loyalty determines trustworthy, pure love, and integrity. Obedience determines trust, faithful, and strong. All of these strengths show the purpose of alliances.
Points
Formatting (6 pts. each)
6
Final Paper in correct format (typed, double-spaced, Times New Roman, 12 pt)
3
Few to no errors (GRUMPS) (4 = -1; 6 = -2; 8 = -3; etc)
Paragraph 1 (5 pts. each)
5
Thesis statement in first paragraph
5
Introduction using one of methods stated (anecdote, example, question, quotation, dialectic, image, statistic)
5
Argument presented in first paragraph
Body Paragraphs (3 pts. each)
1
Contains applicable topic sentences
0
Contains appropriate transitions
0
Contains logical, insightful supporting quotes or examples (total of 3 quotes required from LOTF) and 3 examples from movie/other book
0
Sets up and explains quotes and ties information back to the thesis
Conclusion (5 pts.)
5
Extends essay’s parameters or demonstrates significance of subject in larger