Essay About My Head Was Spinning All Over The Place

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My head was spinning all over the place. It felt like I’ve been punched on my head several times with a brick; I felt consciously blind. I was breathing heavily like I’m gasping for air. I couldn’t move much but hear weird noises echoing repeatedly through my brain, I felt myself moving, shaking back and forth,
‘’Monica! Monica! Can you hear me?’’
I felt myself flat on the floor and I could feel a cold breeze touching my soft delicate skin. Why did he let go of me? Why has it gone silent? I tried to open both eyes to see what’s going on, all I see is a gun pointing straight at me but I couldn’t see who that person was but I knew he hasn’t come to help me, so I was laid flat on the floor and then I knew that it’s the end of me....
(Ding!)
I ran to my phone rapidly to see the text message from my best friend and it said...
*Hurry up girl, meet me outside your house, Jack is taking us there. Love you xx
I’m just an ordinary girl who’s living with a single mother and who has a perfect life, you know big house, neat car, decent location and fashionable designer clothing the only thing is... I’m eighteen and single who’s dying to have an understanding, loyal man but as people tend to say ‘’ You’re like a man in a relationship!’’ Yes. I couldn’t help myself but spend things on guys on whatever they like just to impress them. I know now that I should never have done that, it felt like I’ve been used for money since I’m ‘rich’ enough to buy a Mercedes. So to change that I chose to

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