“Why did my mom and dad give me up for adoption?” Her foster mom said “because they thought , they couldn’t handle having a child.” She lives in a urban city in a foster home. She is 18 years old, she has long black hair, she is 5 feet tall, and she would do anything for chocolate . One day Brandie said “ OH MY GOSH! Why do I smell chocolate?’’ She said. “ I LOVE CHOCOLATE, I LOVE IT , I LOVE IT!” Chocolate drives her crazy, so she started following the scent. The smell of chocolate brought her to an old abandon chocolate factory called Kays. It was the best chocolate factory ever. Brandie told herself “why is the old kays factory smelling like chocolate when the factory shut down years ago ?’’ When she entered the factory it was all dusty
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When she was searching for almost 5 minutes she finally found him. His name was Teddy, he is 6 feet tall, and had a big shiny bald head. With him he had a hostage tied up, she tried going closer , but then a bucket of oil spilled and made a big comtion. Teddy turned around and started scanning the area with his robot eye. The human or she thought was human started walking towards her, “ What can I use to make something look like me so I can get the girl.” Brandie said. She stacked buckets up on top of each other and Teddy didn’t she her run so she tried un-tieing the ropes. The hostage ran as fast as she could, but then she slipped on the oil, so she acted like she was injured so Teddy wouldn’t get her, but when Teddy started walking up to Brandie the girl quietly ran to the exit. Teddy started walking faster to Brandie and said “Would you like some chocolate?” Brandie hesitated and finally answered. “ Yes I would like some chocolate.” She got distracted from eating the chocolate so than Teddy got a chance to run away. Since that day Brandie has been training by running, eating healthier, and start making gadgets. “Why don’t I make a gadget that shoots out …show more content…
She always started with running because the cold air wakes her up. Around 4:30 A.M. She was almost at her house, but then she tripped on a rock and landed on her knee. One of her neighbors heard her crying outside. He asked her “ what’s wrong Brandie are you ok?’’ Brandie said “ No I’m not I think I dislocated my knee.” She started sobbing. Her neighbor called 9-1-1. When she got back home a week later all she could do was lay down and rest. The doctor said “ No active things, no getting up at all if you want your knee to heal faster.” Two days later she felt like it kind of healed so on Saturday around lunch time she got a random call, but she didn’t understand anything that person said so she hung up. A minute later she got another call and it never had caller id so she took a while to answer. She asked “ Who is this?” “Hello this is your mom.” She was thinking to herself why does it not have caller id, but whatever. Her mom asked her if she could get something on the top of the shelf. When she helped her get down a jar of sauce, it felt like her leg has gotten better so she said “ Maybe whenever I help someone out my leg gets healed”. One day Brandie was walking home she jumped over the bushes to get to school, it felt liked it healed. When she got out of the school she went to her route she always takes after school. When she was behind a jewelry
When she was searching for almost 5 minutes she finally found him. His name was Teddy, he is 6 feet tall, and had a big shiny bald head. With him he had a hostage tied up, she tried going closer , but then a bucket of oil spilled and made a big comtion. Teddy turned around and started scanning the area with his robot eye. The human or she thought was human started walking towards her, “ What can I use to make something look like me so I can get the girl.” Brandie said. She stacked buckets up on top of each other and Teddy didn’t she her run so she tried un-tieing the ropes. The hostage ran as fast as she could, but then she slipped on the oil, so she acted like she was injured so Teddy wouldn’t get her, but when Teddy started walking up to Brandie the girl quietly ran to the exit. Teddy started walking faster to Brandie and said “Would you like some chocolate?” Brandie hesitated and finally answered. “ Yes I would like some chocolate.” She got distracted from eating the chocolate so than Teddy got a chance to run away. Since that day Brandie has been training by running, eating healthier, and start making gadgets. “Why don’t I make a gadget that shoots out …show more content…
She always started with running because the cold air wakes her up. Around 4:30 A.M. She was almost at her house, but then she tripped on a rock and landed on her knee. One of her neighbors heard her crying outside. He asked her “ what’s wrong Brandie are you ok?’’ Brandie said “ No I’m not I think I dislocated my knee.” She started sobbing. Her neighbor called 9-1-1. When she got back home a week later all she could do was lay down and rest. The doctor said “ No active things, no getting up at all if you want your knee to heal faster.” Two days later she felt like it kind of healed so on Saturday around lunch time she got a random call, but she didn’t understand anything that person said so she hung up. A minute later she got another call and it never had caller id so she took a while to answer. She asked “ Who is this?” “Hello this is your mom.” She was thinking to herself why does it not have caller id, but whatever. Her mom asked her if she could get something on the top of the shelf. When she helped her get down a jar of sauce, it felt like her leg has gotten better so she said “ Maybe whenever I help someone out my leg gets healed”. One day Brandie was walking home she jumped over the bushes to get to school, it felt liked it healed. When she got out of the school she went to her route she always takes after school. When she was behind a jewelry