She did not even have a symbolic tent to get in. In drama, we learn that randomness is the kiss of death, but this kiss of death was a little overkill. The odds of only Max’s love interest also escaping and going to the same exact place as him is so inconceivable that there is no real point in considering it as a possibility. Max should not be using his luck to get out of the country, he should be stocking up on lottery tickets. If I was the one in charge of ending it, I would take Pepper out of the ending, she is too random for it to make sense. The ending was not significant to the story either. This is a story about environmental dystopia, but by the end of it, it is a love story. That kind of wandering when writing a text in not acceptable. If this is a story about what could happen if we destroy the environment, then it should end with that, not if we all go to Canada everything will be
She did not even have a symbolic tent to get in. In drama, we learn that randomness is the kiss of death, but this kiss of death was a little overkill. The odds of only Max’s love interest also escaping and going to the same exact place as him is so inconceivable that there is no real point in considering it as a possibility. Max should not be using his luck to get out of the country, he should be stocking up on lottery tickets. If I was the one in charge of ending it, I would take Pepper out of the ending, she is too random for it to make sense. The ending was not significant to the story either. This is a story about environmental dystopia, but by the end of it, it is a love story. That kind of wandering when writing a text in not acceptable. If this is a story about what could happen if we destroy the environment, then it should end with that, not if we all go to Canada everything will be