Ennyme Reflection

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This past essay has helped me work towards my goal of developing new skills to create a stronger thesis. The enthymeme thesis is weird. I don’t feel like it helps the essay or helps you to structure your essay. I can see how one main idea, instead of three ideas, to structure your essay around is convenient, but I’m still not so sure about the enthymeme. Hopefully, this next essay can help to see the value in this form of a thesis. I honestly may email my senior year AP English Language and Composition teacher to see what his take on the enthymeme. He can provide me with the proper amount of insight so that I can write well for this class. That is really all I want to do for this class, is learn how to write well with a different thesis structure. I also want to learn how to write better essays with only one to two articles as background knowledge like we just did for this past essay. I found that writing based off of my …show more content…
The enthymeme lays out one main idea that is supported or refuted in the body of the paper. The argument is then supported by logical facts, textual evidence, and thoroughly explained statements. The essay explains the question at issue for the essays’ specific audience by what has been listed above, but also by language use. The essay could be written for third graders or it could be written for other undergraduates. Depending on the language use in the essay. The audience intended for this essay is other women around the world. The reason for this specific audience is so that we women stick together and fight for each other’s rights. This essay then explains clearly to the audience how things are now in factories versus how things ought to be. The working conditions are horrible and should be perfect. The question at issue related to this topic is supported with textual evidence and analysis of this evidence to persuade other women to help third world

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