English Level 5 Unit 5

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In Unit V, lessons one and two was an excellent guide to follow as I began the process of revising my literature review assignment. However, what I have discovered in the revision process that was most accommodating for me, was to read each sentence thoroughly to prevent sentence fragment, comma spices, and run-on-sentence. Also, I realized that after I had corrected and made necessary changes to my initial literature review, putting the project away for several hours and then returning helped me to eliminate unnoticed errors I had overlooked in my assignment. Furthermore, I feel it is imperative to put the assignment down for a number of hours as stated in Unit V, lesson one reading handout, once you have been away from the project for

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