For example, “The British School System compared to the American School System is quite different; several words are spelled differently, along with the class setting and learning styles ‘LEN Essay’” was one of my past sentence that wasn’t well constructed. I didn’t have enough details in this sentence and I honestly need to continue to work on this. A lot did not change until I became use to writing frequently in the class. This issue use to bother me because I didn’t see much improvement due to my bad writing habits. Yet, I began to understand how to fix this issue overtime. I had to change my attitude towards writing assignments and use more detailed sentences in my paragraphs with the appropriate adjectives. Thus as the class continued I began to see my vocabulary increase as I attempted to strengthen this area. No longer would I have to spend several minutes trying to find the proper word to insert in my …show more content…
You have to be able to write well-built sentences to advise your associates and employers on how to run their company and how their money should be spent. In English 103 we went over the rhetoric and how to interpret it in our sentences. I believe this has enhanced my writing skills when it comes to the business world because now I can persuade people in writing more effectively. So far I haven’t taken another class that involves writing however, once I am enrolled in the business school I believe there will be several incidents when I will need to be able to write and this course is preparing me for this as well. The art of persuasion doesn’t only involve writing, it involves speaking as well. In the business world I will have presentations and meetings where I will have to be able to communicate and sway workers to understand my points and act on them accordingly. That is why pathos, ethos and logos will all come into play as I continue my education which will lead onto a