I will use these word, this school year (claim) describing things I have to do to be successful, R1 You need a helpful community to succeed, R2 You need to be empowered and be confident in what you're doing, R3 You need to persevere in order to succeed, R4 You need to do your best to excel in school, R5 You should be able to be enlightened. (E) Having a helping community is important because they can help you if you are struggling. It is also helpful so people can ask questions that you didn't think to ask and help you understand the topic more.(C) Albert Einstein once said “A man's value to the community primarily depends on how far his feelings, thoughts, and actions are directed towards promoting the good of his fellows.” (E) If you and your classmates actions and feelings are directed towards the good of the group then you can all …show more content…
So if you have a hard test that you don't understand you need to preserve and study and get good. I will you the word persevere if I need to overcome a tough task. I will use the word persevere if I need to complete a hard task because it would take hard work and grit. You need to persevere if you want to succeed. (I) In addition, (C)there is a quote that says “ To excel is to do better than you did yesterday” (E) The word excel means to be exceptionally good at something, and it relates to the quote about being better than you were yesterday, It is very similar to the quote Mr. Morrell said be better than you were yesterday. So I would use the word excel if I am doing well in something or need to. TO achieve a hard goal you will need to use all the words community, empower, persevere, excel and in the end reach enlightenment (I) Final enlightenment, (C) “dictionary.com defines enlightenment as “to give intellectual or spiritual light” (E) For example, when someone helps another person out, like a teacher, they give intellectual