Empire Island: A Narrative Fiction

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As I was fast asleep I heard someone breaking in! I jumped up and dashed from my bed to see a bunch of travelers in my cave, with my food. I ran at them attacking and eating some of the men. Then a man jumped on me tied me up and gouged out my eye. As I was screaming I said, “who is doing this!” The man told me nobody. I screamed “Nobody is gouging out my eye!” The men ran off leaving me alone, in total darkness. I screamed and stumbled across the ground! I felt my way to the water and heard the men go off into the distance.

Now i’m left here. How am I going to find food? Will I die? No, I refuse! Then I felt my way back to my cave. I was still shocked and terrified! My father will take care of them, I thought. I then felt my way to my boat and set sail for my father’s home. The sea was choppy. I couldn’t tell where I was going until my ship hit sand. I got on land and shouted for help. A few men came and shouted “away with thee beast!” but I pleaded. The men realized my cries were sincere and they came aboard my ship at a costly fee. We set sail for my father. The sea raged and I heard my men scream and then there was silence. I shouted and felt around the who whole ship for them but they were gone.
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Father! Help me for I cannot see!” Poseidon came from his home and with rage shouted “Who has done this to you!” I told him the man said nobody. “Well then by all the powers of the sea, I shall destroy them!” My father had to leave, but told me how to get to Asclepius’ island. Now, Asclepius is the god of healing and medicine. Surely he would be able to give me my sight back! So then with the sea on my side, and my father seeing me through I left to see

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