Argument Analysis
My classmate Emily Kruse has a good argument essay about Children in Beauty Pageants. Child beauty pageants is not good for the children to do it. The pageants make unlikely the children to change behavior. This make childe to struggles to win but that is unhealthy to children to think too much in this age. Children under sixteen shouldn’t be put in beauty pageants. Most of shown problem with child beauty pageants are the moms because childe may be don’t like to do it, so the mothers take the competition too seriously and push their daughters to do it. In future this can damage child brains to heat the parent because mother. She has good point on her argument essay. Also she has three support idea and