Most of his argument is not backed by reliable data, or factual evidence, but instead relies on a personable style. Which would be an effective style, as he writes about the actual feelings of the protestors. The demographic he is attempting to persuade could be more prone to his believable and charged writings. Unfortunately, his argument falls flat due to his lack of professional sources, and not giving enough reasons as to why OWS has made an impact. In a similar fashion, writing for the people reading, Housel, a writer for the motley fool, a website for investors, uses statistical evidence and professional sources to back his findings. Something that an investor would be looking for, numbers… similar to the information they would be looking at on an investing website. This provides a more effective style and tone, when compared to Spitzer’s writing, by knowing what his kind of evidence and reasons that his readers look
Most of his argument is not backed by reliable data, or factual evidence, but instead relies on a personable style. Which would be an effective style, as he writes about the actual feelings of the protestors. The demographic he is attempting to persuade could be more prone to his believable and charged writings. Unfortunately, his argument falls flat due to his lack of professional sources, and not giving enough reasons as to why OWS has made an impact. In a similar fashion, writing for the people reading, Housel, a writer for the motley fool, a website for investors, uses statistical evidence and professional sources to back his findings. Something that an investor would be looking for, numbers… similar to the information they would be looking at on an investing website. This provides a more effective style and tone, when compared to Spitzer’s writing, by knowing what his kind of evidence and reasons that his readers look