“Electra Heart: More Than Just a Sophomore Album” was the first college level essay I have ever wrote. I am proud of how I managed to explain the concept and feel of the album through this essay. I am also proud of how I formatted the paper properly since it was the first time I have ever used the MLA format. Another thing is that I feel that I managed to explain how the album Electra Heart was something a lot more than an album and how special of a project it was.
Even though I am proud of most of the essay, there are things I would like to revise if given the chance. I had some problems with commas when it came to listing. Also I would fix the few comma splices that I had. Another thing I would change is that I put commas in front of in
Even though I am proud of most of the essay, there are things I would like to revise if given the chance. I had some problems with commas when it came to listing. Also I would fix the few comma splices that I had. Another thing I would change is that I put commas in front of in