Have you ever seen the strange statues on easter island? well in the magazine article “did aliens make these statutes” clearly explains two ways the statues appeared. over 1000 years ago a few explorers landed on the island and found the statues and no humans. it is believed that the people that lived there were rapanui, and they created the statues. There is only one problem, the statues weighed up to 80 tons and their height ranged from 4 to 33 feet. currently there are two theories to how the statues got to where they are. one is that they rolled the statues on sledges, which they made out of trees and the other is that they walked the statues by using ropes. i believe that they walked the statues, it was the only possible way.
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Lastly walking the statues was faster. This method was faster cause the rapanui didn't need to spend time building the sledge and rollers. In addition it took less people thus it was faster because they needed less people to work.Finally the people got to their destination fast by walking the statues and could cover more distance.
Have you ever seen the strange statues on easter island? well in the magazine article “did aliens make these statutes” clearly explains two ways the statues appeared. over 1000 years ago a few explorers landed on the island and found the statues and no humans. it is believed that the people that lived there were rapanui, and they created the statues. There is only one problem, the statues weighed up to 80 tons and their height ranged from 4 to 33 feet. currently there are two theories to how the statues got to where they are. one is that they rolled the statues on sledges, which they made out of trees and the other is that they walked the statues by using ropes. i believe that they walked the statues, it was the only possible way. using this... (only first 800 chars …show more content…
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Lastly walking the statues was faster. This method was faster cause the rapanui didn't need to spend time building the sledge and rollers. In addition it took less people thus it was faster because they needed less people to work.Finally the people got to their destination fast by walking the statues and could cover more distance.
Have you ever seen the strange statues on easter island? well in the magazine article “did aliens make these statutes” clearly explains two ways the statues appeared. over 1000 years ago a few explorers landed on the island and found the statues and no humans. it is believed that the people that lived there were rapanui, and they created the statues. There is only one problem, the statues weighed up to 80 tons and their height ranged from 4 to 33 feet. currently there are two theories to how the statues got to where they are. one is that they rolled the statues on sledges, which they made out of trees and the other is that they walked the statues by using ropes. i believe that they walked the statues, it was the only possible way. using this... (only first 800 chars …show more content…
Length: 16.6 words
Short Sentences (< 17 words): 10 (56%)
Long Sentences (> 35 words): 1 (6%)
Sentence Variation: 11.8 words (std deviation)
Your average sentence length is a little bit low, which may indicate difficulty writing more complex sentences. Please read the guide to effective use of sentence length.
Line chart of the length of each sentence (first 50 sentences). A jagged chart indicates variation.
Helpful Resources:
•Effective Use of Sentence Length
Style
Sentence Beginnings
Simple Sentence Starts: 0%
Variety is the hallmark of a good writer and this is especially true in regards to sentence starts. Creatively arranging sentence beginnings breaks up the monotony and choppy style associated with a simple noun phrase followed by a verb. This does NOT mean that all sentences should begin with prepositional phrases, transitions, or adverbial phrases, but it does mean that you should be certain to pay attention to sentence starts and deliberately edit for variety if necessary.
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Adverb: 17%
Article: 0%
Conjunction: 0%
Noun: 0%
Preposition: 6%
Pronoun: 0%
Verb: 6%
Other: 11%
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