1. In the desserts section, I’d incorporate some opinions of the writer. Like the other food articles in this magazine, an opinion on how the gluten-free desserts tasted and which one was the writer’s favorite would enhance the article. This change would make me more likely to try Jacquelynn Beckmans best dessert.
2. The “Earth to Seattle” article is a little misleading. I think Seattle mag should focus on things you can do and see in Seattle. The article and photos made me want to visit this exhibit, and I was dismayed to find that it is a personal collection and will not be shown anytime soon to the public unless they get enough funding.
3. On the “Mind Over Stress” article, the subhead states that “Seattle kids are 800 percent above average in anxiety..” Yet there is no attribution for said statement. The article mentions Richard E. Berger but does not cite him as the one who said that. The change would allow less confusion as where the statistic came from and who said it.
Under departments, the Top Doctors category seems lonely and out of place. Perhaps it could …show more content…
I also read Vogue because of their beautiful photo spread and fun clothing. I read Seattle magazine so that I can stay up-to-date on the happenings in Seattle while I’m at school in Oregon.
I do not follow any blogs. I follow Chrissy Teigen on Twitter because of her humor and glimpses into a real depiction of celebrity life. I follow Time and The Week for current news articles. I also follow Entertainment Weekly for popular culture information.
“Big Little Lies” by Liane Moriarty. It has great commentary on the world of upper-class families and their children. The book deals with abuse, affairs, and death with a raw and humorous look on life.
I hope to gain real-world experience in the field of journalism. I want to improve my writing skills and learn the ins and outs of working a 9-5 job in
2. The “Earth to Seattle” article is a little misleading. I think Seattle mag should focus on things you can do and see in Seattle. The article and photos made me want to visit this exhibit, and I was dismayed to find that it is a personal collection and will not be shown anytime soon to the public unless they get enough funding.
3. On the “Mind Over Stress” article, the subhead states that “Seattle kids are 800 percent above average in anxiety..” Yet there is no attribution for said statement. The article mentions Richard E. Berger but does not cite him as the one who said that. The change would allow less confusion as where the statistic came from and who said it.
Under departments, the Top Doctors category seems lonely and out of place. Perhaps it could …show more content…
I also read Vogue because of their beautiful photo spread and fun clothing. I read Seattle magazine so that I can stay up-to-date on the happenings in Seattle while I’m at school in Oregon.
I do not follow any blogs. I follow Chrissy Teigen on Twitter because of her humor and glimpses into a real depiction of celebrity life. I follow Time and The Week for current news articles. I also follow Entertainment Weekly for popular culture information.
“Big Little Lies” by Liane Moriarty. It has great commentary on the world of upper-class families and their children. The book deals with abuse, affairs, and death with a raw and humorous look on life.
I hope to gain real-world experience in the field of journalism. I want to improve my writing skills and learn the ins and outs of working a 9-5 job in