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The women see the camp site “were saved” says Donna.As they are 100 yards away and the Accent runs out of gas.They get out of the car and trudge forward towards the trees, when they get there they see three trailers.They search around the trailers and in them,then gina wails out a loud gasp “*GASP*!”A water hose with water!As night falls they make a small fortress with one of the trailers so no snakes or other animals come in “well good night tomorrow's a new day”Gina says.Jenny and Donna shake there head in agreement.As the sun rises Jenny is the first one up and wakes every one else up but it takes a while for Gina to get up.jenny cooks breakfest while Donna treats Gina as best as she can while eating breakfest Gina explains “This tates …show more content…
all three women are in front of the crashed helicopter looking shocked at what they see.Gina and Donna get them out and to one of the trailers.Jenny takes care of both of them while Donna helps Gina.By nightfall Jenny has the two pilots rested up and fed.”How have they been doing?” Donna asks.”Fine” jenny replies “but they haven’t woken up yet”.Well tomorrow's a new day”Gina says.At sunrise Everbody is up including the two pilots.The air feels dreary as Donna cooks breakfest.”Looks like this is the last breakfest. need to search for breakfast tomorrow”Donna says.Everyone agrees.by afternoon everone is eitheir working or searching.While Donna is trying to search the the trees she hears an odd noise she goes out front and see’s two helicopters and three parkranger vehicles zooming towards her she screams in exicite ment and tells everybody to look and sure enogh they are surrounding the trees.everbody gets out and greetsthe group.four park rangers pick up scott and tyler and lift them to the helicopters”you saved us”Gina shouts.”yes we have, now hurry up we need to go”The chief park ranger says.All three girls hop in the backseat of the parkrangers car.As they drive off jenny looks back and notices a big,blinding light in the

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