The first essay was mostly a personal essay where a topic was chosen then it had to be related to an essay called “Bad Feminist” by Roxane Gay using the same format Gay used. The second essay was an argumentative essay which we had to compare multiple sources, an essay called “Why Nice Guys Finish Last” by Julia Serano and two TED Talks and come up with one conclusion that ties all the sources together but still add personal views within the essay. Comparing my grades, I found that I did better on essay one than I did on essay two. I believe that I did better on essay one because it was a personal essay where I put my own thoughts into the writing. As for essay two, I believe that I struggled with creating a thesis and relying on the quotes and sources to make my essay rather than adding personal thoughts into
The first essay was mostly a personal essay where a topic was chosen then it had to be related to an essay called “Bad Feminist” by Roxane Gay using the same format Gay used. The second essay was an argumentative essay which we had to compare multiple sources, an essay called “Why Nice Guys Finish Last” by Julia Serano and two TED Talks and come up with one conclusion that ties all the sources together but still add personal views within the essay. Comparing my grades, I found that I did better on essay one than I did on essay two. I believe that I did better on essay one because it was a personal essay where I put my own thoughts into the writing. As for essay two, I believe that I struggled with creating a thesis and relying on the quotes and sources to make my essay rather than adding personal thoughts into