Heroism Definition Essay

Improved Essays
Definition Essay EA 1.2
Formal Style
Paragraph 1: Opening paragraph: (at least 5-7 sentences for each paragraph)
1. Compelling Introduction (Hook) *Choose One*
-Quote: Must be from our reading/viewing/listening. And must use quote sandwich
-Personal Event/Anecdote (May use ”I” only in this type of personal opening but nowhere else in this formal paper.
-Statistic: Must be from our reading/viewing/listening ,d3bh.
-Startling or interesting fact: Must be from our reading/viewing/listening.
-Other (Explain) ____________________________________ -Question (Cannot use the word “you” in the question).
Thesis Statement:
Explain the concept of heroism: Answer the question: What is a hero/ heroism? Include three
…show more content…
Example: A paint brush is useful, a tool for artists and is not to be confused with a marker.
Paragraph 2: Use a transition word or phrase to begin your new paragraph which will focus on function FROM your thesis statement:
First define the function of a hero/heroism and...:
-Use the word “function” in your paragraph.
-Make sure to use the word/phrase for the function from your thesis statement.
-What are traits/attributes (adjectives) synonymous with the word/phrase you chose in your thesis statement that define hero/heroism?
-What words SHOW what a hero does? (Describe what a hero does using verbs.)
Choose a character, author, article, poem, excerpt, or a scene that supports the statement. Find and include a quote that supports that statement
Cite the quote.
Explain why the quote supports the statement. (respond/reflect/analyze)
Wrap up with a concluding
…show more content…
What are some traits/attributes, that describe what a hero is not or does not? (ie: adjectives, nouns and/or verbs that focus on that trait or attribute you chose to represent negation)
Choose a character, author, article, poem, excerpt, or a scene that supports the statement. Find and include a quote that supports that statement. Cite the quote. Explain why the quote supports the statement. (respond/reflect/analyze) Wrap up with a concluding sentence.
5: Conclusion:This is where you want the reader to clearly understand your message/explanations and purpose. (However you may not use a personal pronoun.)
Use a transition word or phrase to begin your new paragraph which will focus on wrapping up what you have discovered about heroism.(DO NOT USE: In Conclusion!)
Study your paper including your statements, facts, and quotes.
Insert an unused quote or fact that supports the main point.
Restate thesis by creating a stronger, more emphatic and more detailed version of your thesis.
Reserve the last line for the most powerful sentence.
Arrange the sentences until the paragraph -flows smoothly and ends with a satisfying

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Begin your essay with a hook (anecdote, quote, observation etc.)--2-3 complete sentences. At the end of your hook, state your claim in a complete sentence. (this is your 1st paragraph) 4. Paragraph 2. Transition w/a topic sentence and give the 1st reason for your claim, go to your article, indicate the lines or paragraph where you found the proof (quote), explain what this proof means and how or why this is so.…

    • 1440 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Joseph Campbell, the creator of the Hero’s Journey archetype, once said, “A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself.” Heroes are important because they put others before themselves. They’ll risk their lives to help others. This paper will tell you what the definition of a hero is using the following methods: Function, Example, and Negation. Frederick Douglass is a great example of a hero.…

    • 361 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    HOULDIN MARCOVITZ 503 7RCB HISTORY/MS. WELLS HOW DID JEFFERSON DAVIS’S PRESIDENCY AFFECT THE CIVIL WAR? NEXT STEPS: Share Ms. Wells’s Feedback on Outline with Mr. L. ✔ (Mr. L. responds to Feedback, giving HM instructions to finish Essay with John. ) ✔ Hi, HM!…

    • 1630 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Realistic and Fictional heroes have portrayed the literary standard of what a hero is supposed to be. Each genre shares great comparison to one another describing the characteristics of a hero. They each share positive characteristics that provide an interpretation of strength and intelligence but also share negative characteristics such as a dwelling past or a sickness that they could not overcome. Even with these great comparisons, realistic and conventional hero's personality and journey towards heroic power differ. The stories of The Odyssey and Jake Olsen provide an example of how heroic stories could differ.…

    • 490 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    What are the makings of a hero? Are they the physical qualities or the outstanding achievements? Or is it the mental battles of the hero that count? Three heroes from ancient english literature will be assessed for the noble qualities of a hero. Brave Beowulf was an honorable hero of the Geats.…

    • 464 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Suggested Score 80% Accept Suggested Score Manual Score: Manual Score Prompt Rubric | Checklist Two Julius Caesar Speeches Brutus and Mark Antony both delivered speeches after the death of Julius Caesar. How do these speeches relate to the conclusion of the play?…

    • 477 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Part 1: Write a Thesis statement that is one to two sentences long in which you: A. State your thesis on how industrialization after the Civil War influenced U.S. society, economy, and politics. Justify your response. The mechanical upheaval was a period of incredible change in the United States. Numerous progressions happened that prompted an adjustment in financial matters and mechanical focus that we have today.…

    • 1698 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The characteristics that I see in a hero are putting others before yourself, courage, and overcoming weakness. Heroism is hard to define because it is the personal acts that make someone heroic. It can not be measured just by how large the act is, but by what is in the heart of the person and what they have to overcome personally to achieve these acts. “The greatest obstacle to being heroic is the doubt whether one may not be going to prove one's self a fool; the truest heroism is to resist the doubt; and the profoundest wisdom, to know when it ought to be resisted, and when it be obeyed.” (Hawthorne,…

    • 937 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Attributes of a Hero Many traits make up a hero such as humility and bravery. Many heroes have these traits, but some do not. For example, Odysseus is very prideful which makes him be less of a hero although he is very brave and has many other heroic traits. Another example of a brave hero is Superman. He goes towards danger and tries to stop it.…

    • 631 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Every book and piece of literature has a hero in it. They all are different and they all face different challenges, that aren’t always slaying beasts like some people may assume. Yet, they all do have one thing in common; standing up for someone or doing the right thing or staying loyal, even while facing hardship. A type of hero is the one who does what is right even when others will frown on them and create prejudice. Examples are like Atticus Finch from To Kill a Mockingbird and Juror Eight from 12 Angry Men.…

    • 1619 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Throughout the semester, I was required to write essays for EN 101. In previous years, I wrote mostly the same style of essays, however, this semester I was required to write many different styles of essays. Thus, I was forced to leave my comfort zone for writing and to challenge myself, which in turn helped to improve my writing. My essays that I have wrote for EN 101 demonstrate that I have improved in supporting my thesis, keeping the paper organized, and creating better conclusions.…

    • 816 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    What Makes A Hero? To many, a hero is defined as a person who is idealized for bravery, outstanding accomplishments, and or noble qualities. But in all reality, a hero is a person who puts others before themselves. A person that you can look up to as a role model is a hero.…

    • 996 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Definition Of A Hero Essay

    • 1016 Words
    • 5 Pages

    “A hero or heroine is a person or character who, in the face of danger and adversity or from a position of weakness, displays courage or self-sacrifice. “ When most people think of the word hero, one might think of a person with power helping those who are in trouble, but heroism can be anybody. A hero can be a teacher, a mother or father, or even a person such as myself. Heroes are everywhere you look, you never know what influence you may have on someone. Somethings that can be simple to one can make a huge difference in someone else’s life such as a simple hello.…

    • 1016 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The conclusion usually expressed through three main parts: • Aim of the assignment • Summarizing the main point briefly • Final comments with consideration of the…

    • 749 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Every individual has his or her own writing process. But, certainly writing is an art and the five-step process of writing which seems to be linear starting from prewriting to publishing is cyclical and recursive. Keeping a track of this process a writer can carve out a way to a good piece of writing on any topic. The writing process has five steps, which are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing and publishing. These steps are written like a recipe, the sequence is really essential.…

    • 603 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays