John,
Don't worry man shit happens. Thank you for your comments. I to have to read my work out loud but still i typically end up missing some things i actually have a minor form of dyslexia. One thing that really helps me is I will have my wife read it out loud to me before i turn in the final drafts which really helps find some of those mistakes. Thank you for the ones that you did point out though. The second paragraph until the colon is my evaluation of the essay, i will try to rework some to make this a little more clear. thanks for your help and
Don't worry man shit happens. Thank you for your comments. I to have to read my work out loud but still i typically end up missing some things i actually have a minor form of dyslexia. One thing that really helps me is I will have my wife read it out loud to me before i turn in the final drafts which really helps find some of those mistakes. Thank you for the ones that you did point out though. The second paragraph until the colon is my evaluation of the essay, i will try to rework some to make this a little more clear. thanks for your help and