The way he weaved from the past to the present in such a harmonious way made the story captivating. The Narrator goes from expressing his innermost thoughts when first bringing Sonny home, “I was trying to find out something about my brother” to the past, “‘Safe!’ my father grunted…” and then back to the present “[my father] always went on like this….” Baldwin also seemed to utilize descriptions of characters’ eyes to convey a character’s actual feelings. When describing Sonny’s eyes after a fight with the Narrator over living with Isabel, he wrote, “There was something in his eyes I’d never seen before….” Or when he described a woman whom stood watching the music, “…her black eyes glittered like coal.” And finally, when he described those whom listed to the music outside, he wrote “…the eyes focusing on something
The way he weaved from the past to the present in such a harmonious way made the story captivating. The Narrator goes from expressing his innermost thoughts when first bringing Sonny home, “I was trying to find out something about my brother” to the past, “‘Safe!’ my father grunted…” and then back to the present “[my father] always went on like this….” Baldwin also seemed to utilize descriptions of characters’ eyes to convey a character’s actual feelings. When describing Sonny’s eyes after a fight with the Narrator over living with Isabel, he wrote, “There was something in his eyes I’d never seen before….” Or when he described a woman whom stood watching the music, “…her black eyes glittered like coal.” And finally, when he described those whom listed to the music outside, he wrote “…the eyes focusing on something