I would like to start off by saying you did a great job giving the readers feedback on how you felt about Jake Gyllenhaal's performance in Donnie Darko. I was intrigued to know that not only you were able tell the readers how you felt about the plot of the film, but you were able talk about an actor’s performance. It was interesting that you added in a fact about the director of the film, “ the 2001 dark/fantasy movie film was Richard kelly’s first movie”. Also, it would be great to add a in text-citation for it. One other thing, in the last paragraph where you’re talking about the ending of the film. There is a long sentence that could be consider as a common splice and to me it seems a bit confusing. “In the end, we’re led to believe that
