• In my thesis I had mentioned Trump bashing Obama’s actions, but in my paragraph I had focused on diction, such as “allow”, “watches helplessly”, etc. used to describe such actions. Now my third paragraph focuses broadly on specific events that Trump talks about and how that relates to his opponent Hilary.
• Originally, I had synthesized historical foreign policy victories with national pride/ exceptionalism. Where in fact, these two represent different strategies within the speech. The separation allowed me to bring in details about Trump’s forth