It’s great showing statistics and point-of-view, but where did all the information come from? In the beginning of Don’t Blame the Eater where Zinczenko comments, “If ever there were a newspaper headline…Kids taking on McDonald’s this week, suing the company for making them fat” (462). Where did this comment come from, was it a headline from a published newspaper? There is no source proving that kids are suing McDonald’s. Another example of no sources is when Zinczenko wrote about how diabetes was mainly a genetic disorder in children before 1994. However, a five percent of children had diabetes caused by obesity or Type 2 diabetes (463). He doesn’t cite any sources where these statistics came from or show a connection between obesity and the food from fast food chains. It is important to have some facts that are creditable, so a writer does not misleaders his/her readers and so the readers can trust the
It’s great showing statistics and point-of-view, but where did all the information come from? In the beginning of Don’t Blame the Eater where Zinczenko comments, “If ever there were a newspaper headline…Kids taking on McDonald’s this week, suing the company for making them fat” (462). Where did this comment come from, was it a headline from a published newspaper? There is no source proving that kids are suing McDonald’s. Another example of no sources is when Zinczenko wrote about how diabetes was mainly a genetic disorder in children before 1994. However, a five percent of children had diabetes caused by obesity or Type 2 diabetes (463). He doesn’t cite any sources where these statistics came from or show a connection between obesity and the food from fast food chains. It is important to have some facts that are creditable, so a writer does not misleaders his/her readers and so the readers can trust the