1. You have a great first paragraph, but I think that you should shorten it, and divided it to smaller paragraphs. You have to many quotes in one paragraph. You can focus one paragraph on September eleven and how it cause racial profiling. Another paragraph can be about how in airports most Africans American and Latinos are stop to be searched because of not only terrorism, also for other crimes like smuggling drugs, which whites are equally as guilty for the same crime but are not stop because of their race. This way you can also spread your quotes and evidence, so it won’t be too much information in one paragraph.
2. Every time you use a quote at the end you want to cited with the authors last name and the page number following. Also,
2. Every time you use a quote at the end you want to cited with the authors last name and the page number following. Also,