The first way, is that in my research paper, I focused on contemporary tourism in Egypt, and talking about how tourists see Egypt as a place of lure, which sets up cultural barriers. However, when I remediated the project, I decided to focus just on how contemporary media misrepresent Ancient Egyptian race and culture. My argument developed throughout my remediation project because I was able to focus just on Exodus: God and Kings and the Katy Perry “Dark Horse” video. This allowed me to go more in depth about each of these sources of media, and allowed my argument to stay more focused, and not overwhelm my audience with information. Finally, my project was able to develop because I didn’t have to explain all of my quotes. Since my topic revolves around race and cultural appropriation, in the research paper it was necessary to unpack the quotes, however in the remediation project, my argument changed because I didn’t put all of the quotes I had used in my paper. This allowed me to shorten my argument, but make it more succinct, and understandable since my argument changed from a written one, to a visual and auditory
The first way, is that in my research paper, I focused on contemporary tourism in Egypt, and talking about how tourists see Egypt as a place of lure, which sets up cultural barriers. However, when I remediated the project, I decided to focus just on how contemporary media misrepresent Ancient Egyptian race and culture. My argument developed throughout my remediation project because I was able to focus just on Exodus: God and Kings and the Katy Perry “Dark Horse” video. This allowed me to go more in depth about each of these sources of media, and allowed my argument to stay more focused, and not overwhelm my audience with information. Finally, my project was able to develop because I didn’t have to explain all of my quotes. Since my topic revolves around race and cultural appropriation, in the research paper it was necessary to unpack the quotes, however in the remediation project, my argument changed because I didn’t put all of the quotes I had used in my paper. This allowed me to shorten my argument, but make it more succinct, and understandable since my argument changed from a written one, to a visual and auditory