Dialectical Journal Chapter 1-5

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Chapter one The hard times A man name max his wife and his little girl are going through a rough time. Money and hope is
Low. Max has no choice to go travel to a different city and look for a job. He’s looking at the
Time and it seems almost time for his ship ride. He looks at the ticket thinking of what he is going to miss the most. Going to miss the way he makes paper birds for his little Lily, his wife
Linda and her cooking, tea and love. The time has come to pack up, clothes are ready but one more thing missing, a picture of his most loves ones. Carefully max wraps
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Max is saying how everything will be ok and that he will send money for food and clothes. The time has come, Lily, Lily! Linda is yelling for her to wake up. She gets up eats a little bit of cereal. Max puts on his hat, Linda dresses Lily up. Lily puts on her little boots and gives max the suitcase. The three of them step outside lock the door and walk with sadness. The city is black, white and dark like how Max’s heart is going to be when he leave his family. Lily seems like she wants to cry. Max looks at Lily smiles, takes off his hat and on his head has a paper bird. He gives it to Lily and gives her a hug as well. Max turns around and sees
Linda crying; he hugs her and gives her a kiss. It’s time the train is about to leave. Max grabs his suitcase and let’s goes of Linda’s hands. Off he goes the train is going to lead him to a ship and the ship is going to a different city. Both Linda and Lily are walking back home with sadness
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He buys a bowl of soup, while eating the soup he looks at his family picture and begins to get sad. He starts to look out the window and think about Linda and Lily. His heart and mind filled with sadness just like outside with the clouds with darkness and soon about to start a storm. The ship goes though the storm with no problem. Going through day after day in the ship with a lot of people. Max started to write a note on a paper and makes it to a paper bird. Out of nowhere he hears a loud noise heading his direction. Max gets up and looks up to only see lots of bird passing through. Then he looks at the other direction and sees a big beautiful city called the city of birds. The city got its name cause of the way there is lots of birds everywhere in the city. Max grabs his suitcase and gets off the ship. Max has to sigh some papers, get check out by a doctor there and he has to know the city’s laws and rules. He has to get a picture taken for a passport for the new city he is

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