On November 1, 2016, you were assigned a project to make minor revisions to Standard Procedure 001:48:1, Disposition of Authority Property. Following the assignment of the project, you were instructed by me to: • Correct language errors, if any, in the published document On November 18, 2016, you submitted a draft procedure to me with the language error corrections you were recommending. The approximately 15 one-word recommendations you made included the following errors: • “Maintains an inventory of stored furnitures for use in Central Office (CO) locations.” • Coordinates the transfer and disposal of office furnitures at CO locations only. (In both cases above, you added an “s” to furniture even though the word furniture is an uncountable noun.)…
Tarik Adenwala 12.2 Writing Assignment Revision is when you go back and reread what you have written and edit your paper so that it is to your highest standards. It starts at one stage, the rough draft, and moves on up to the final stage, or the final draft. When I revise my papers, I read through it to make sure everything flows nicely and punctuations are right.…
The Process of Effective Writing Green (2011) states that APA and good writing is a long term process (p.69). The writing process has always been difficult for me. My writing has improved with the help of my instructors, online resources, and the college writing center. In order to write effectively at the graduate level, I will need to refer to the various writing resources that are made available. According to Green (2011)... graduate assignments need to reflect the appropriate level of critical thinking relative to the degree.…
Analyzing my writing process Writing is tough. Putting your thoughts on the paper can be hard, especially you if you don’t know what your thoughts are. It’s hard to find your voice when you don’t know what you want to say, and how you want to say it.…
How my Writing Has Improved? In this semester I have accomplished a great improvement in my writing. Now that my English 090 class is coming to the end, I can see so far how I become a better writer. In fact, I always struggle with my writing.…
I’m not saying that my writing is perfect, but it definitely improved. I still have to better my grammar and my ability to develop my ideas even more, but, overall, I’m better at writing than I was in the last few years. And I have to thank you for my improvement. I never saw myself as a good writer until I came into your class and I’ll be eternally grateful for that.…
Have you ever gone to school and didn’t know how to write or start an essay? I’m pretty sure this all happens to us, which is why we attend school to improve our writing. Seeing myself at the age of five, I’ve always wanted to write a paper as if I was a writer. Now being a ninth grader, I have improved a lot. Improvement came in a variety of ways such as, using proper vocabulary or even spelling a word correct.…
Professor Skrobacki, I would like to apologize for my completing all the required assignments that I did not turn it that led to me failing your course during the first term. It was my responsibility to ensure that I past the first go around and because I let my flesh get the best of me I did not do so. As a result, I have to retake the course. I have registered for your ENGL 102 Research & Academic Writing course that starts on Monday, March 13, 2017. I believe it is my responsibility to make up for my mistake of taking advantage of your kindness, and pass my required English course through you.…
Everybody with a high school diploma knows the struggle of turning in a draft paper to the English teacher, and the next day receiving a paper with more scribbles and writing than a doctor’s note from a hypochondriac. These notes are meant to help us, but inevitably make us doubt our writing style, content, and meaning of existence. However we, and also our teachers, may have the wrong idea about revising and annotating. Nancy Sommers’s journal article “Responding to Student Writing”, from The National Council of Teachers of English, discusses this issue in-depth, and by performing a pseudo-study and analyzing the comments teachers made on a particular paper, her group found that in fact the comments teachers make and their effect on the indecisive…
Writing on a graduate level takes lots practice and time, but finding a scholarly voice first is key. A scholarly voice is the tone in which the writer chooses to express in their written work. Academic writing should never be dull in tone; the language should not be boring. It should be very engaging, clear to the reader who knows nothing about the topic you are writing about. Knowing your target audience is a critical part of the writing process.…
Draft zero: Writing Process Analysis My writing process is emotional. It is like a beautiful piece of art being made out of pain. Every single one of us takes different methods or steps in our writing process. Mine could be improved with simple anxiety therapy!…
I would like to outline my appreciation to you for teaching our AP Language class. You really do make the English class enjoyable and meaningful. I believe that my writing of critical analysis will be much better by the end of the year. I write to apologize for my irresponsibility regarding the Summer Homework. I am sorry that I haven't been really on top of my assignment that was due months ago.…
When entering college and finishing my first essay, I realized my process wasn’t good enough in order to write a good essay. When doing my first narrative and comparing my narrative to the article “Thirty-eight who saw murder,” my process was reading thoroughly over the article and writing a reading report of the reading which it was included in the beginning of my introduction as seen in the image below. Afterwards, I just started finishing my introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. In addition, when finishing my first draft I revised it as well as from my instructor as shown in the black marks below. From the individual conference with my instructor, it is shown in the image that I needed to fix almost my whole introduction.…
My writing process coming into junior year was quite flawed and would go moderately like this: I would try and start with some hook that at least sounded like it related to the topic I was assigned. I then added a thesis that did not sound like total trash that included exactly what I planned to discuss. As I wrote the rest of my essays, I would sometimes realize there was something I felt added to the argument’s appeal, and after adding it to the body paragraphs, I summed it up in a couple words and squeezed it into my thesis. That was about the maximum amount of revising I would do for my essays. My decently crafted essays contained simple diction with a few SAT words I remembered while writing thrown in awkwardly.…
Officer Perez, this is your annual Employee Performance Appraisal. I have not been your supervisor for this entire evaluation period. This appraisal reflects the observations made by myself as well as Sgt. Drake A9663, Sgt. Mellott B0058 and Sgt.…