Detective Brown: A Narrative Fiction

Detective Brown was sitting at the station late Saturday night and all he wanted to do were to go home , when he was almost asleep , the phone rang super loud . When detectives / a detective / the detective answered it was a panicked mom was saying , " My son was supposed to be home hours ago , I think he's been kidnapped . " detectives / a detective / the detective responded , " I'll be right over . " . When detectives / a detective / the detective arrived at the house the Dad answered quickly , and they all sat down at the kitchen table . Detective started asking them some questions , " What are is name , and what time was he supposed to be home ?" " . His name is Jackson , and he was supposed to be home of / for / to nine , and by around ten-thirty we started to …show more content…
" Mom claimed , " Why was he out so late at night ? " . asked detective , " He went to a friends house and promised that he would be home of / for / to nine . " she pleaded , " How about we go over to the friends house and see if they know anything . " . When they arrived at Jackson's friend's house , detective knocked on the door , when the the friend's mom answered she looked very tired , detective asked her and the kid some questions . When detective came back and talked to Jackson's parents , He claimed " They said he left at eight forty-fives and they didn't hear anymore from him , but the kid brought up something weird . " "What is it ! " . Mom responded , " He said Jackson has been really bad at school and on Friday , their teacher Mr. Smith , pulled Jackson aside and told him to be careful this weekend , and to me that sounds very suspicious . " pleaded detective , " I think tomorrow we should go to the school and talk to him . " said Mom . The next morning Jackson's parents and Detective Brown all went to the school to talk to Mr. Smith , but when they arrived he wasn't there . They walked into the principal's office and detective talked with the principal about what was going on