Creative Writing: The Ripper

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I (Maincharacter) start to feel filthy, i haven 't showered in days and my hair is scratchy. I smell horrible. I walk up to the kidnappers. "Is there any place I could take a shower?" I ask without sounding polite. "Not unless you wanna take a swim." He says as he starts laughing. The rest of them join in. I walk away as I flip them the bird. the younger male kidnapper walks up to me once we 're out of everyone 's sight. He tells me where the shower is. So I guess thoughs jackasses really do have a shower and just don 't give a damn about us. I sneak the smart girl into the shower with me because I know she wants to get clean and she wouldn 't tell anyone. The shower is big enough so we shower together.

(beach scene)

The boat makes it to land. It has a
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"Holy shit!" She says. We both start laughing and drinking. Neither of us really drink that much though and we 're both just barely tipsy. We start to see a boat come to shore. It 's not big enough to recue us. It 's a row boat and the people on it seem to be lost and desperate for land. They saw our fire. Shit! did the kidnappers see the fire too? I hear someone running through the trees. They saw our fire, we 're dead! When the people in the row boat reach shore the kidnapper that was in the woods comes out and starts talking to the …show more content…
He doesn 't say anything. Another one of the kidnappers runs towards the beach. "WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THAT FIRE?" He shouts angrily. Yaromir grabs my upper arm and pulls me in front of him. "And I found her with this in her hand." He says as he hands him the bottle of vodka. "You may leave now." The kidnapper says to Yarmomir. When he leaves the beach the other kidnapper picks up a small log and hits me across my face. I stumble to my knees, it hurts like hell. Usually my imediate response to pain is swearing, but I wont give him the satisfaction of knowing how much it

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