Describe Your Post Analysis

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Like you, I am also organized, but your post makes you sound so organized that it is uncomfortable! In regards to being a perfectionist, that is so me! I think organized was an excellent word to describe you, and really captures the type of person you are. Overall, I believe your post was beautifully put together, and it was a fantastic read. I always enjoy reading what you put out, so keep up the great work.

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