One of the greatest writing strengths, I perceived in my Walden paper, was in the description. In the Walden paper, I describe my Walden in great detail using descriptive words. In writing the Walden paper, I looked at pictures and other descriptions of the mountains then proceed to write about it myself, “The icy cold water, making my fingers tingle as I run my hands through the surface. The speeding current of the white water rushing by like it is running from the fish that I see swimming along with it”. In this paragraph where I had to describe my Walden, I used many descriptive words to paint a picture of my surroundings. In the same way, I also wrote about what I would do at my Walden in details to show what the place was like staying
