Attention grabber: Why was there an increase in depression in the United States?
Lead into Thesis: Depression is everywhere in this entire world and is caused by multiple things.
Thesis:All over the world depression is caused by school, social media, and relationships.
First Main Point: School
TS:The first source of depression starts with school.
CD:School’s everywhere have students that constantly pick on and bully others because they’re not perfect. Also to coincide with the bullying kids stress over having perfect test scores in order to maintain a high GPA.
1.CM:Most of the older generations before us, including some teachers, are the main ones who bullied. 2.CM: Most kids end up with crippling depression by the time they graduate