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Good evening, Greetings to family, friends, supporters, and the lovely ladies of Alpha Kappa Alpha Sorority Incorporated. I am Kayla J. Henderson, hailing from the city of brotherly love Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. I am a 19-year old; Mass Communications major with a concentration in Television, Radio, and Film . With tenacity and vision I plan to use my degree to produce my own shows and in due time own a radio and television station. While at Delaware State University, I have been apart of our campus's radio station, WDSU Radio the Hive, to increase my experience in the field that I aspire to work in. I also am the president of the organization,
Good evening, Greetings to family, friends, supporters, and the lovely ladies of Alpha Kappa Alpha Sorority Incorporated. I am Kayla J. Henderson, hailing from the city of brotherly love Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. I am a 19-year old; Mass Communications major with a concentration in Television, Radio, and Film . With tenacity and vision I plan to use my degree to produce my own shows and in due time own a radio and television station. While at Delaware State University, I have been apart of our campus's radio station, WDSU Radio the Hive, to increase my experience in the field that I aspire to work in. I also am the president of the organization,