Personal Narrative: The Deep Water Spirit

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The Deep Water Spirit

A Boy Born in 1304AD April The 9th. they named the boy ice, he was Genius and shy His Dad Was His life who won't continue with. His Dad Promised Him To Protect him until he Die and Live Happy

his father was poor with no money left, he has a lot of debt and he was old nearly getting to 60 years old.

every time he sees me he say You Are My Heart Crystal and I always happy that he really value me as his own loving kid, I was doing all my chores Then the stranger entered my father's house asking him about debt every week and month but then when stranger pointed at me my father Was SCREAMING! SON RUN NOW RUN!!! i Was So Scared At This Point I Ran And Ran Climbing The stairs then my breath stops so I hided in the attic so I thought he was pointed to me to kill me
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we were sitting to talk i asked his name he said my name is xavair i said its pleasure to meet you my name is Ice When i asked him why did you enter this place he said because i was hunting for food then he asked me why did you entered this forest then i told him because priest told me to bring cure in deep forest water he said This is Impossible to get there its far away it will take forever and maybe you will die, then i said in brave voice I Will Do Anything To Cure My Father then Xavair said you are brave boy i will be happy to be with your side and help you till end because you saved my life my life is yours and I'm proud to be your side

Xavair Was someone who is there to listen Xavair Was someone whose company you enjoy Xavair was someone who makes you smile Xavair was someone who is willing to stick around when things get tough i know his personality since 2 days past he's great person no like other xavair starting to be my best friend we had good times while we are traveling to get to the water Xavair saved my life and my father soon i mean its my first time having friend i think I'm overreacting or he is really

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