Debbie And Alex's Rooms: A Narrative Fiction

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It was nearly a month since Debbie and Alex’s parents have left their children. Two bears, Debbie and Alex, were left in a dirty cave. Under the scorching sun, Debbie and Alex were fighting again. “Debbie, get me a cup of honey ice tea and a honey sandwich!” Alex was reading comics. “We are almost out of food! We need to go find some to sustain our lives. ” Debbie was worried, since food her mom had been storing was coming to an end. “Alex, I am going to seek for food in the lake. Are you coming? I need some help.”
“Who cares!” Alex snapped back while thinking about what he could when his sister is not around.
Debbie wandered around to find any source of food. When she found none, she started her journey to the lake.
Meanwhile in the cave,
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He shouted, “Debbie!” There was an absolute silence, and he was now scared. He walked to Debbie’s room and found her bed empty. He ran out the cave and confronted pouring rain, realizing seriousness of the situation. He started to scan the surroundings, searching for his sister’s scent and footsteps. He couldn’t find any trace, so decided to walk to the nearby road. With the street lamps, he was certain that he could reach the lake and find his sister. On his way, he saw a black silhouette lying on the road and was shocked, thinking that it was his sister. He started sprinting, and it was the first time that he ever sprinted. As he got closer to the silhouette, he found that the road was brimful with its blood. ‘Please, please…’ he thought. He soon found out that it was not his sister. Relieved, he sprinted again on the road, although he could feel pain on his legs. It was near dawn when Alex saw a familiar silhouette walking down the road. With hope, he trotted down the road and discovered his sister slowly walking with handful of food. Alex ran and hugged his sister tight. “I am sorry, I am sorry for everything, Debbie…” His tears soaked the

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