Death Valley Short Story

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Death Valley BY: Holten Richards

Gina, Donna, and Jenny were still lost they thought they would never get found or find a way out of there. They could hear buzzards and and smell all the sandy ness . They set Jenny to go look for food and water and they will set up camp when jenny was gone the 2 others set up tents they opened it up. Than AHHHHH screamed gina like there was a crazed murderer jumped out a scorpion fell out the tent She slipped it fell on her but it bit her. Gina passed out 30 minutes later jenny arrived donna said she got bit by a scorpion Jenny “said oh my gosh” donna allready tried to help her but she did not know what to do. “I think I know what to do said jenny” She pulled out a first aid kit and pulled out a knife

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