Cry Out Descriptive Writing

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Blackness is all you see. The icy, damp, solid ground is the only thing your rigid back feels. You consider whether you should cry out, but your own sobs get caught in your throat, and your shouts become muffled. You think desperate thoughts about how someone will be concerned if you didn’t reach your destination, but you’re all alone. Saying some rather unpleasant words to make yourself feel better, you cry salty tears that leave tracks down your dirty face.
“Anyone! Help!” you scream, your voice high and shrill.
What a sight you are. Your usually unreadable face is frantic and full of gloom. The pleasant, fresh, damp smell in the ravine is tampered by the smoky smell your car leaves. You look over at your steaming, destroyed car and then up at the dimming sky. You can hear the road above you. A car passes by roughly every
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You strategize on how to escape before dark but all ideas need you to move your stiff body. Grunting, you attempt to sit up only to have white spots appear before your eyes and a tremendous pain arrive in your body.
You look up. A boy, seeming about sixteen, stands with a bottle loosely gripped in his hands. He sways dangerously near the edge, and you can hear screams and shouts of protest.
Not wanting to miss your chance, you yell as loudly as you can: “Down here! Help me! Please, you must!”
The cries stop and you see three heads come into sight, all three sets of their eyes on you. In that moment, you do not feel relieved. You feel uneasy. Whirling your head around, you whimper as you see the boy fall. You can’t look. You close your eyes and cover your ears. You hear screams from above you, and a loud, unpleasant thud somewhat close to you.
“You guys, we have to get help for them!” one of the heads from above you cries.
You open your eyes and glance over at the boy. You could touch him, he is so close. Reaching out, you put two shaky fingers over his wrist: Nothing. A tear slides down your

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