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I hear a slight buzzing… As I begin to regain consciousness, the piercing sound begins to get louder and louder as seconds turn to minutes. I open my eyes and they frantically dart around the pitch-black room. My breath starts to come in shallow and rapid bursts, that damn buzzing getting louder still. Wave after wave of paralyzing thoughts flood my brain, they leave me no room for any coherent thought. A crushing weight settles on my chest inhibiting all attempts of breathing. I panic even further and let out a long, earsplitting scream. “Am I going to die?!” I scream again. The buzzing fades momentarily before starting again, louder than before. “Stop! Stop!! Stop!!! I can’t take this!” I hear a sharp mechanical

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