Critique Of An Informative Speech On Gun Control

Kattie, you did a very fine job on informing the class about gun control and the issues of having guns on campus. For the most part, your speech was easy to follow, but I should caution you and tell you to not be afraid to use transitional phrases as you speak. I felt like there were transitional phrases here and there, but not as much as it should have been. In addition, even though, there was a situation where you was not able to use your visual aids, you still did very good on getting your main idea across. Overall, you did a really good job on discussing and giving facts about gun control, even though majority of the class is not able to bring guns on campus yet, but it's good that you brought this to our attention to think about. Also, you did a very good job on eye contact and not showing any signs of nervousness, so I applaud you on that. Lastly, I just encourage you to be more creative with your attention getter because your topic can be very hard to convince/persuade people because of ways certain people grew up and all of these crimes going on in the world today that can …show more content…
Honestly, I never realized and seen it to be that way, but thank you for drawing that to my attention. In addition, your speech was easy to follow in most cases, but be sure to use more transitional words and phrases, as well as learn how to wrap your sentences when moving on to the next point. Your visual aids seem very decent and well organized, but learn how to explain and describe the pictures you use on your aid more. Overall, you did very well in making eye contact with the audience and informing the class on your topic, so good work. Lastly, I just encourage you to speak out more when you present because you have a deep voice and when you mumble or talk fast, it can be very hard to hear you clearly, and also, be sure to give resources on your topic that you are sharing with the