The fantastical descriptions are grounded with familiar language such as “blue water” and color descriptions like “green and rosy” but made unfamiliar because of words such as “sheets” and “quays [coming] from a multitudes of openings”. The image of a painter at their easel is also familiar but the uncommon images pulls the reader away from the expected allegorical depiction of a waterfall and instead introducing them to a new image. Also in part one, the poem lacks a consistent rhyme scheme so the use of free verse eludes to a lack of control seen in the other poems. A rhyme scheme is constraining and is often broken when started:
Insouciant and taciturn,
Some Ganges, in the firmament,
Poured out the treasure of their urns
Into the gulfs of diamond.
“Taciturn” and “urn” maintain an “aa” rhyme scheme but that is broken with “firmament” and “diamond”. The words are nearly slant rhymes, which does not match with the perfect rhymes ending in “urn”. The poem breaks from the sonnet structure Baudelaire often uses which suggests a movement towards a different understanding of poetic form.
The want to return to more traditional art is exemplified in part two of “Parisian Dreams”, when the speaker wakes up from the dream. Once awake, he expresses discomfort which his surroundings: Open, my ardent eyes could see The horror of my wretched hole: I felt my cursed cares to be A needle entering my