Mystery enables the reader to explore the idea of a crime of the unknowns leading the audience to curiosity. As a result, Heath used mystery as an element which encourages the reader to think outside the box with the twist and …show more content…
By doing this, Heath demonstrates detailed writing as an element in his short story ‘Rats’, to expound to the reader what Bromham had discovered. “The middle aged woman’s eyes was so wide that the whites were visible all around the irises”. (pg 56). Furthermore, Sussex shows the use of vocabulary she uses to describe the scenes in the short story of the ‘The Thieftaker’s Apprentice’. “Down I fell, through the grass and sedge into shallow, filthy, brackish water.” (pg 66) This element shows the actions happening in this scene when the thieftaker’s apprentice fell over his nag. Therefore, detailed writing is an element that strengthens the audience’s mind of visualisation to know the significance of what’s happening in the short