Creative Writing: Whispering Pines

All of a sudden, there was a terrifying and trembling noise in Whispering Pines that made me jolt upwards. Quickly I ran about the house investigating what had happened. I couldn’t believe it! My family disappeared! My pets vanished! What just happened? Where is everyone? When I opened the front door, the world was completely still. I was standing on the front porch staring uncontrollably in shock. No people. No pets. No cars. No movement. I was alone! I was in a panic, not sure what to do. Loneliness and fear entrenched me. Feeling helpless, I began to run.
Arriving at my neighbors, I shook the door, but no one answered. “Hello! Is anybody home?” I don't get it! While running to the next home the same dreadful and trembling noise made me stop. “What’s going on!,” I yelled. The roaring blast sounded like a detonating bomb. Clamping my ears, I suddenly fell to the ground. Where is that chilling noise coming from?
Immediately daytime turned dark and the noise increased like it was advancing towards me. I was confused. “Can someone help me?,” I screamed. Then I realized my voice went away. I tried to scream, but no noise came out. I was beginning to lose control of my body. All I could feel …show more content…
The clouds started to cover me like a blanket. I was surrounded by dense fog. But then I noticed everything started to get blurry. I couldn’t tell what was around me. Nothing looked familiar. Sinking into the ground, I could feel something grabbing my legs. At first, I could feel a set of hands, soon after I began to feel many sets of hands pulling me under. Once below the surface, terror filled every inch of me. Can I breathe? Will I survive? The faces were ghost-like. They looked somewhat familiar. Their faces were distorted, full of anger and fear. I could see my family, my neighbors, and my friends. I finally realized where they had all gone. Now I was a victim,