Creative Writing: We Are In Prison

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Title. “I don’t understand what is going on.”Jack said.
“Well we are in jail.”Tim said.
“Why, I don't even remember what happened,”Jack said. All of a sudden Tim and Jack looked over and saw a fierce looking man.
He came up to them and said, “looks like we have some good old newbys today huh.” The officer that was walking him back to his cell kept on yelling at the inmate to get back into his cell. He said it with a mean tone. Jack yield for a cop. “I have no idea what happened last night,” said Jack. “Finally,” Jack said. Jack began to ask the cop all kinds of questions. The cop had no idea what jack did. The cop told jack he has to wait for his court date to find out anything about what had happened. Jack asked when is his court date.
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all the inmates eat breakfast at 6 in the morning. Jack was so scared. He is just 17 and the rest of the inmates are in there 20. “I have no idea where I'm going to sit,” said Jack. “You can sit with my group over in the middle.” Said Tim.
“Ok sounds good.” Said Jack. “You know tim. I've been really worried about this court date I have. What if i'm in for murder or something.”
“I don't really know what to tell you Jack.”
30 minutes has past and Jack is on his way to the courtroom. After the long ride across town they finally get to the court house. The judge calls for jack as soon as he steps into the room. Jack's hands are soaked with sweat. Jack feels like he is about to faint. The whole room is just a big bluer. The judge starts to talk and it's all just feels like this could not be happening to him. All of a sudden jack starts to see flashbacks to the party that jack went to. He sees himself drinking alcohol and partying with a bunch of people. Then jack flashes back to real life and he hears just a little bit of what the judge was saying. The judge says you are being charged with murder of your older brother Seth. Right then, right there Jack falls on the ground and people are calling 911. For the next couple of days Jack is unconscious and in the hospital. Jack's parents come and check on Jack. “Your son was told that he was convicted of murder and then he passed out on the floor.” The

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