Creative Writing: Things Fall Apart

Improved Essays
“Taran? Are you all right?” asked Bili. “You went quiet for a long time and seemed sort of lost.”
“Fine, fine. I was remembering everything. I’ll explain it as best I can…”
Taran relayed the memories to the best of his ability
“Llacheu showed me around, we ate. Gods, Bee, it was one of the best meals I’ve ever had, a cream soup with beef and sweet, soft bread like you’ve never tasted.
“I sparred with Llacheu, and he was good with a sword for a seventeen-year-old, though I managed to disarm him twice,” Taran said with a grin.
“Ha! I knew it. What next?”
“We talked. Their language is difficult for me, so I fumbled a lot, but Llacheu and I spent the evening together, and he told me about his woman-problems, how he loved a girl but didn’t know how to
…show more content…
“I said to him: ‘If I can manage to not slit my throat, I think you can summon the courage to tell a woman you love her.’”
Bili let out a roar of laughter. “How in the gods did he reply to that?”
“At first he blanched, then he laughed.”
“And you left the next day?”
“I did. After breakfast with the Llacheu, the king, and his knights. The men admitted they’d been wary of me, and some said they hadn’t wanted me there at all, but Llacheu said they now all believed I was an honorable man and our new alliance stood strong.”
Taran left out the part about how just before Taran left, Llacheu embraced him; the two had forged a strong bond. Llacheu offered for Taran to come back any time, for a visit to Camelot or to settle for good.
“I suppose that’s it,” said Taran. “I’m alive and Father lied.”
“What do you mean?”

“Camelot wasn’t a place filled with evil and cruelty, and the king wasn’t unreasonable and brutal, as Kahl insisted. In truth, Camelot was a golden city, a place of prosperity that housed noble knights, talented craftspeople, and gracious, humble citizens. Maybe Father was scared of them, or felt he could never measure up to the great King of

Related Documents

  • Decent Essays

    Arthur had to step up because he knew that they needed a king and he felt that he could do and be the best that he…

    • 644 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    “Perceval? I’m worried about Pawl,” Joan fretted while they prepared for the day in their quarters. “He’s not himself. He’s quiet and evasive.” Perceval sat on the edge of the bed and pulled on his boots.…

    • 1771 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Dawn broke to an explosion of bird songs, the cacophony starting Booker awake with a disgruntled groan. Unimpressed by the early morning alarm clock, he angrily pulled his pillow over his head and attempted to drown out the noise. However, the humorous fact that the sound easily penetrated through the downy feathers brought a good-natured smile to his lips, and with a resigned sigh, he threw the pillow onto the floor and sat up. From across the room, Tom yawned loudly, a sleepy smile spreading across his face.…

    • 618 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Chapter One “Wake up!” Owen jolted from his sleep. “I told you I needed these papers filed and reported on by the end of the day! I expect that to be done! Get to work!”…

    • 1530 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Dawn broke to an explosion of bird songs, the cacophony startling Booker awake with a disgruntled groan. Unimpressed by the early morning alarm clock, he angrily pulled his pillow over his head and attempted to drown out the noise. However, the humorous fact that the sound easily penetrated through the downy feathers brought a good-natured smile to his lips, and with a resigned sigh, he threw the pillow onto the floor and sat up. From across the room, Tom yawned loudly, a sleepy smile spreading across his face.…

    • 1248 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    He knelt down beside the tub and pushed up his sleeves. Louis held up a spouge and Ashton stared at it blankly. “Do you know how to clean yourself?” Louis asked. “F-Forgot.”…

    • 1078 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The blow had brought him back to his senses and now regretted letting his anger cloud his judgement, and now, giving his enemy the advantage. Nightburn finally spoke, “I grow tired of this game. Powers or no powers, I am going to finish this because I have more worthy enemies to deal with than you. Nightburn touched his sword, running his hand down the blade and as he moved his hand down its edge the blade erupted in flames. Realizing the seriousness of his situation and that Nightburn was not going to abide by his word, he braced himself for the worst.…

    • 476 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Image One Mischief sometimes arises out of the most serene of circumstances. A glorious Autumnal sunset provided a stark contrast between those in the light on the stone wall above and those in the shadows on the ground below. Ralan watched a guard pause in his rounds up above and grinned. It was too perfect. The guard was well lit in his white armor and robes, while he and Raef could flee unseen amidst any number of shadows.…

    • 873 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Medieval England, 1502, Prince Author, son of King Henry VII, passed away from an unknown cause before he would be granted king. In his passing he left Catharine of Aragon, of whom he was betrothed at a young age, without a suiter. Next in line, Henry VIII offered to take her hand so as to save both her and his family the trouble of arranging another marriage. It was agreed upon by all parties and approved by the Catholic Church, so the marriage was lawful and true. Years later the now queen gave birth to a child, a daughter.…

    • 814 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Physically Free, Emotionally Bound Connor Alforque explores David Fengel’s inspiring story from extreme depravity and captivity to his freedom journey home. Will David’s long and agonising ordeal inside a concentration camp deprive him of finally experiencing true freedom, or can he radically rebuild his mind after the experiences he endured during his excruciating past? Held captive and abandoned, David’s mind was in darkness, his eyes were blind to the outside world and David was physically and mentally captured and controlled. He had been imprisoned by the Soviet Union for more than a decade; and, at the age of twelve, believing that both of his parents were dead, David Fengel escaped from the very clutches of the Soviet Union itself…

    • 817 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Auron watched the musicians and dancers play around the square. It was different than Lustria. There was no celebration, no pomp and ceremony. It was a solemn time, one to contemplate ones chosen path. It retrospect, it was an early onset of a funeral.…

    • 1837 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Klaus picked up his fork and begin to eat as he looked at the brunet a bit embarrassed and a little worried that he was not digging into the meal. " Is there something wrong with your food Leo?" The young man sprung up, flustered by the question then slowly calmed down. "N-no the food is alright…

    • 562 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Compassion In Frankenstein

    • 1528 Words
    • 7 Pages

    By the end of volume two of Frankenstein, Mary Shelley laid out a thorough background of the Monster from his creation, to his life in the cottage and to confronting his creator. In the beginning, the reader views him as a poor abandoned being, trying to find his place in the world. Although the Monster is not negative to society at first, when he discovers that no man will accept him, he seeks revenge, making him no longer a victim but a monster. Yet, despite his murderous and hateful tendencies, the reader is conflicted with feelings of compassion for him, relating to his rejection and longing for acceptance that all created beings experience.…

    • 1528 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    Lancelot: A Short Story

    • 871 Words
    • 4 Pages

    The feast was a big day for all the knights in Camelot. Some men raised their glasses and drained them, others ate heartily, and all laughed and spoke merrily. The night was so filled with fun and festivity that none of the men noticed when Guinevere excused herself and Sir Lancelot followed, trailing close behind. A single tear traced a path down Guinevere's flawless face.…

    • 871 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As I remembered her injuries, I broke the silence between us. “How are you holding up over there?” “About as good as I look” She managed a small chuckle. I could tell she was hiding how hurt she really was.…

    • 2429 Words
    • 10 Pages
    Improved Essays