Creative Writing: The Murder Of Travis Hoke

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The room was still and quite, the guy was trapped to the device. It was a slow and dark night when a man was walking home from work and stopped to the sound of a loud scream from the building beside him, he quickly dialed 911. “Constantine County Sheriff’s Office, how may I help you?” “Yes ma’am I’m walking home from work and I heard a really loud scream coming from the old warehouse on Windmill Dr., I think you need to get to some cops out here to check it out, NOW!” The cops rushed to the scene to find a mangled body rested upon their eyes. The man’s blood was everywhere, it was splattered all over the wall, and the strong coppery odor was very unpleasant.
That night the cops took the man into custody for questioning. “Where and why were
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The detectives went to Daren’s to interview him with more questions. The detectives knocked on the door and Daren answered the door to the first knock. “Yes sir, how may I help y’all today?” Daren asked. The detective replied “we are here to ask you more questions about the murder of Travis Hoke.” Daren looked clueless and said “I thought the cops already asked me questions, I thought I was done?” “No sir, not until we find the murderer, you’re still a suspect.” Daren then let the detective’s into his house. “Would y’all like something to drink?” Daren asked. “Water will be fine” the detectives both said. Daren went into the kitchen to get some water. He brought out two glasses of water and gave them to detectives. “So why were you walking home so late at night?” “I told the other cops this; I was walking home from work, then I heard a scream so I called the cops.” Daren said. The detectives looked at each other and said “I’m not feeling to good.” What the detectives didn’t know is that when Daren was fixing their water he put something in their drink. Daren drugged them. Daren took them back to the warehouse, where he had two chair devices waiting for them. He placed both detectives into the chairs and walked out. When the detectives woke up, they started screaming for help but they knew no one ever walked down where the warehouse was located, they knew they had to fight for their

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