Creative Writing: The Little Red House

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Our story starts with a girl and a boy. Dee Coleman and James Kennedy. They had a very close yet odd friendship. Not quite like anything you’ve ever seen before. Peanut butter and jelly...that’s what they were. Nobody ever truly understood this friendship. Not only were they best friends but they were like Bonnie and Clyde--partners in crime. Dee and James weren’t always the jolliest kids in school, and they didn’t talk to many people. Well anyway, on the night of January 17, the two kids disappeared. There are many stories about how this happened. But, I’m here to tell you the one I know is true. Alright, let’s start in the morning of January 17. It was a warm, yet brisk morning. It was finally Friday and all the kids started to make plans …show more content…
They finally got out and went down to the dirty stream hidden away in the forest near the little red house that nobody dared to go by. This house was, well a creepy clown. Anyway, this little red house is what brings us to the next part of the story. That day the two “brave kids” decided to finally check out what was inside. As they approached the door slowly and carefully, James noticed a sign. It read, “Do NOT …show more content…
All I know is that they used one wish right away. That wish was wasted on something stupid.
Before Sinister could give a warning about wishing, somebody decided to bud in. “I wish for a lifetime supply of banana bread!” James cheered excitedly. This angered Dee. She knew it was a stupid wish, and she knew there would be consequences. “James! Are you stupid?! You just wasted a wish!” She continued to yell, and James didn’t know why, “There are consequences you know! You need to make wise and smart wishes!” Dee kept going on. She was fuming. You could literally see the smoke coming out of her ears.
Before they knew it, the little red house was filled with moldy bread and rotten bananas. They could not move. “I need to make the second wish!” Dee yelled, “I wish we were home!”
Once they got home, she called up Abby Anderson right away, and told her what happened. That’s how I know. When they had gotten home, two wishes had been wasted. A man appeared at Dee’s house at 11:30 p.m on January 17th. It appeared like he had taken the two kids with him, but nobody knows for sure. That was the last anybody ever saw of James and Dee. But, they still have one last

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