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THE HOUSE ON 81st STREET

It was a day like any other but today it was special Halloween night October 31st, 2016

I lived in a nice house on the end of the block with my mom and my cousin Baekhyun it was a nice neighborhood despite the house on the end of the block it was a big house but really old the wood was rotten and there is weeds everywhere and the paint is chipped. I live right across from this house and every full moon I look out my window before I go to bed and I will sometimes see the lights turn on and off and sometimes I will see someone in the window but you have to keep in the back of your mind that no one has lived in this house for 30 something years right so i’m just seeing stuff because i’m tired or is it.

Tonight I
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“But she was just, she was just right there’’ I said stuttering “ I could of swore she was just right …show more content…
Baekhyun you have to believe me please something bad is in that house please you have to believe me.’’ I said yelling off the top of my lungs
“Jay calm down you're tired you have to go to bed and plus you have school tomorrow you just had a bad dream for the last time go to bed!’’ Baekhyun said

“I’m going to find out what is going on in that house even if it kills me!’’ I said as Baekhyun walked out of my room and shut the door behind him.

That next morning when I got to school I told the only people that would believe me my two best friends Xiumin and Chanyeol at first they didn't believe me but as I kept telling the story there smiles faded into signs of worry.
“Are you sure it wasn't just because you were tired Jay I mean you could have just dreamed it’’ Chanyeol said “Yeah we all see stuff that can freak us out when we are dreaming or when we are tired’’ Xiumin added on
“Guys i'm not kidding I wasn't even tired I heard screams in that house and when I looked out the window I seen the little girl,you know what we should do go down the library after school and do some research on this house’’ I explained “ Sounds good’’ Chanyeol and Xiumin

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